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These are some samples of the writing we have been doing. You are also able to look at your child's writing page by scrolling down to the bottom of the page.

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Making Turkish Food

  1. Grab the napkin 
  2. Get some pita bread
  3. Put lettuce in the pita bread
  4. Put a teaspoon of yoghurt in the pita bread
  5. Put a teaspoon of hummus in the pita bread
  6. Put a spoonful of tabbouleh in the pita bread
  7. Put 2 falafels in the top of the pita bread
  8. Eat it!

By Hannah


In the weekend my cousin had a baby. We had two parties. One was yesteray the other party was the day before yesterday. I was so happy when I saw the two babies. They were so cute. I got to hold them both. I gave them to their mum so the babies could go to sleep. After that we turned the light off and closed the door. We couldn't see anything at all.

 

By Youniss

 

 


My favourite zoo animal is a tiger. The first reason is they can run fast. The second reason is they can jump out and catch their prey. The last reason is they can camouflage in the dry grass. That's why they are my favourite zoo animal.

 

By Dontei Samuels


 

When all the girls were crunching the newspaper it sounded like thunder. I ran outside.

 

By Kodey

 


 

Today Room 8 went  in the staffroom. Room 5 was in the staffroom too. Mr Taura told us about liquids, solids and particles. Then we made icebocks.

 

By Solomon


I think cats are the best because they are easy to look after. Cat food is not a lot of money. I love cats. Cats are soft to look at.

 

By Sophia

 


Mr Hemi is tough. He can bring down balls from the roof. When he is angry he puts his hands on his hips. He has muscles. He can put in bark if there is bark outside of the garden. He has blue eyes and he has brown boots. What I really like about Mr Hemi is he plays with children and he brings down balls from the roof.

 

By Siu

 

 


I like wet days because I like to cook with my mum and dad. I don't like wet days because they will make me sick.

By Kasanita


[A retell of a cartoon] 

Once upon a time their were three sneaky rats. Their names were Ratty, Cheese, and Miss Whishker. They robbed banks. Then they got in the bank. When they got in the said "You're under arrest." Then they froze the teller of the bank. The Chief of the Bank called Spycat. Spycat found a clue. It was a piece of cheese and then he found another  clue. It was a piece of a dollar not. Then he knew who it was. Then Spycat busted in the door. He froze the sneaky rats. Spycat and the bank people lived happily ever after. The rats got sent to jail.

 

By Saffron

 


 

Once upon a time there was a princess and a king and their daughter. One day an ugly ogre locked the princess in a big dark tower. The princess said "help me". The king told the knights to save the princess. Then the knights ran off. The ogre scared the knights and the knights ran away. The dragon saw the princess. The princess said "help me." The dragon blew his fire to the ogre then the ogre flew to the sea. The princess went on the dragon's back. Then they flew back to the tower. Then they kissed. Then the dragon turned into a prince.
By Tino


Once upon a time there lived three bears. There was one big bear and one Medium bear and one small bear. Then they made porridge. One there was a big Bowl, one Medium Bowl and one small Bowl. Goldilocks came around. She saw the house. She said "Oh, I wonder who this house belongs to?" Then she went in. She saw the porridge. She tried the big one but it was too hot. Then she tried the Medium one and that was too hot too. So she tried the small one and that was just right. So she ate it all. Then she went to bed. She tried the big one. It was too hard. Then she tried the medium one it was too soft. Then she tried the small one. Then the three bears came. Back. She Woke up. She ran straight out the door and Back home. The Mama Bear and Baby Bear and Papa Bear were so angry. Then they had to buy a new chair for little bear. He was angry and sad.
By Hannah

 

 

 
 
 
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